My family is big. I have got three sisters and one brother. I live with my wife and children. I have got two lovely children. Nuno is the oldest and he is twenty-eight years old. Hugo is the youngest and he is twenty-four years old. My father is oldest person and my godson is youngest person. The most special person in my family is my father because as he is unique. Because it is my shelter.
Well done, João! Compare this text with the firs sentence you wrote on this blog. A BIG progress, isn't it? Here are my corrections: My father is THE oldest...godson THE youngest... ... my father because he is unique/ my father as he is unique I love my family because it is my shelter.
My family is big. I have got three sisters and one brother. I live with my wife and children. I have got two lovely children. Nuno is the oldest and he is twenty-eight years old. Hugo is the youngest and he is twenty-four years old. My father is oldest person and my godson is youngest person. The most special person in my family is my father because as he is unique. Because it is my shelter.
ResponderEliminarWell done, João!
ResponderEliminarCompare this text with the firs sentence you wrote on this blog. A BIG progress, isn't it?
Here are my corrections:
My father is THE oldest...godson THE youngest...
... my father because he is unique/ my father as he is unique
I love my family because it is my shelter.