It´s a terrible day of winter, It´s raining. I´m riding my bicicle at rain, wen suddenly I saw a car right to me. I try to run way but I´m surprized and I can´t run way. Driving the car it was a man who was talking at phone and he don´t see what he´s doing, so I started yelling and gesticulate to the man and wen he hunderstand he was making a mestak, he ask me so sory. Moral of the story we have to take care when we are driving and don´t talk on the phone because it´s to dangerous and wen it´s raining more dangerous becames.
Vítor, Your text has only spelling mistakes that normally appear when students need writing practise. The fact is that you do have a very good vocabulary knowledge and a great potential as far as English is concerned. I liked the story! Very good work! I leave you here your text with my corrections. If you have any doubts, I'll be pleased to help you tomorrow in class.
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It was a terrible winter day. It was raining. I was riding my bicycle, when, suddenly, I saw a car driving towards me. I tried to run, but I was taken by surprise and couldn't run away. It was a male driver who was talking on the phone and he didn't see what he was doing. So, I started yelling and gesticulating to the man and when he realized he was making a serious mistake, he told me he was sorry. Moral of the story: we have to take care when we are driving and avoid talking on the phone because it's too dangerous and, if it's raining, the more dangerous it becomes.
it's raining
ResponderEliminarIt´s a terrible day of winter, It´s raining.
ResponderEliminarI´m riding my bicicle at rain, wen suddenly I saw a car right to me. I try to run way but I´m surprized and I can´t run way. Driving the car it was a man who was talking at phone and he don´t see what he´s doing, so I started yelling and gesticulate to the man and wen he hunderstand he was making a mestak, he ask me so sory.
Moral of the story we have to take care when we are driving and don´t talk on the phone because it´s to dangerous and wen it´s raining more dangerous becames.
Vítor,
ResponderEliminarYour text has only spelling mistakes that normally appear when students need writing practise. The fact is that you do have a very good vocabulary knowledge and a great potential as far as English is concerned.
I liked the story! Very good work!
I leave you here your text with my corrections. If you have any doubts, I'll be pleased to help you tomorrow in class.
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It was a terrible winter day. It was raining.
I was riding my bicycle, when, suddenly, I saw a car driving towards me. I tried to run, but I was taken by surprise and couldn't run away. It was a male driver who was talking on the phone and he didn't see what he was doing. So, I started yelling and gesticulating to the man and when he realized he was making a serious mistake, he told me he was sorry.
Moral of the story: we have to take care when we are driving and avoid talking on the phone because it's too dangerous and, if it's raining, the more dangerous it becomes.